Like everyone else, I love the imagery and the title. The coffee thing works really well.

I like this a lot.. the title is awesome and the whole coffee thing is awesome.. great piece

Very strong images and like the style but the word and feels like it's repeated a bit too much. Interesting subject though, love the take on it you have its very unique. Really enjoyed this well done.

wow i love the title and the imagery in this poem is stunning. keep on going!

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hah, great ending to this. the &'s were a little distracting though.

funny how we both made our accounts on the same day

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this was so full of hope and pain and... it was just great. you did a great job with it.

whew. i loved it a whole bunch!

i adore it! i really and truely do. absolutely perfect. i love it!

-sunshine