That was strangely beautiful. It was an interesting and fascinating way to peak into real life and the way relationships change, and people grow. It kind of went full circle, ne?

I had to read this when I read the summary, but it turned out to be great! It isd very comforting.

This is a pretty strange idea but really original! It creates a warm mental image (if that makes sense!)

That was soooooooo good! You have some talent you know that?

Very nice use of repeating form, though I would play around with the tempo a bit; try to make it flow more smoothly. Very poetically (_;;) powerful, I took it as more of a metaphor then anything else... *shrugs* I like it. What else is there to say?

Hey I like it! ITs a good poem! (And I wanted to say thanxs for reviewing my poems so many times..)