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LateDawnsAndEarlySunsets
2006-06-17
ch 1,
You have very beautiful dreams! I hope you get what you want someday. Though I fully understand about not wanting to hurt your parents.I have been doing that a lot lately. I don't think my mother has ever cried this much in her entire life. I know I haven't–it's been a really bad year because of me. Not because of my dreams, but because of my many faults...

Anyway, this is a really great poem!
Gaki Toki
2006-05-18
ch 1,
I'd say "screw you parents" and do whatever the ** I want. Teaching runs in my family and I'm gonna be a **' teacher, I don't care what they want, it's my life and I'm gonna do what I want. I don't think it matters, maybe they DO know what's good for us but I don't care. I want to do what I want to do and no one is gonna stop me. I'm all Gung-ho about my life and I don't think you should go quietly! BE WHAT YOU WANT TO BE! And I read your bio by the way, I like it.

I'm a Christian but not conservative and I hate Bush and close-minded people...I don't get how you hate frogs though, the only type of frog I hate is dead...haha, cause my sister touched a dead frog once and made me reel back in disgust...thus stepping in poison ivy. THAT SUCKED **. Anyways, wonderful poem, it actually reminded me of one I wrote, just with the way it WAS you know? Haha...

~Gaki
The Postscript
2006-05-08
ch 1,
Eh. Okay...while you've got me in the mood, I have this lame dream of living in California (I've never visited even) and as far as a job, there are still many things I'm interested in...English, theology, psychology, maybe nursing. Which is bad since my parents and my older sister did (or will) major in the sciences and my twin brother in math, the two subjects I can't grasp for my life. Oh well. Looks like I just got voted as the odd one out. Nice write, I like the relaxed rhyming and imaginative language. Keep writing.
poet tree
2006-05-05
ch 1,
So much like me. Argh. My 'rents want me to become a psychologist. And I want to be a recording engineer. So yeah, I totally feel this.
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