I love this. the entire poem has a really good rhythm to it, and a lot of fierce emotion. my only complaint would be that the last line seems to throw the balance off, for some reason. If I were you, I'd go for something a tad shorter in that line, but that is just me.

take care and thanks for writing this!

ooh, so bitter and fiery. i loved the emotions hurled into this. it was wonderful and very empowering. great job♥