I was pretty impatient so I read through this again and it was then that I realized the irony with Chastity's name and her job.

Anyway. A very good story you got here!


PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I'm begging you. (=

OMG I love it William reminds me of Edward from Twilight. Please update soon (begs) :-)

aah that so wass NOT a dream!! -dances in place-
please write more, so want to find out more...
and obviously he isn't just drawing his family in those style clothing, thats what they wore, 'cause they lived back then, and died back then too, and i'm guessing they died in the great london fire... perhaps.. or not... i'm sure there were many other fires back then. Whatever, not the point. And i love jules! he so has a crush on her. i wanted to hug him when she told him about her date. he sounded so sad.

Please update soon.
Thank You.

~Sistine~

prettyschweet

This is a truly wonderful story. I like the way you use dialogue; it's realistic and flows naturally. And the storyline is creative, keeps the reader interested throughout the entire read. Good job on this, and I can't wait for more.

~carm~

Cute! Can't wait for the date.

well this is a very interesting story.and i would love if you updated soon.keep up the excellent work. (i sound like teacher don't i?)peace out!

dis story, is beyond words, lol!! Wow! i love William! i read this story a few hours ago, but i came back to review it cuz after i read this i went to ur page and read all ur other stories, 2! it took me a while but it waz so worth it cuz ur like, an awesome writer! to love u more was like, hearbreaking and sad what with abi dying and all and im really looking foward to seeing thank the nile and all the other oens that ur gonna come up with. do you do collabs with any other authors on this site? cuz that would be the greatest story of all time and i would favorite it without even thinking! plz, plz, plz, plz, plz, PLZ update soon cuz if you dont ill cry and this story is just amzing!

kirsten :)

I loved the intensity of the dream. It saddens me greatly that is was only a dream, but that's also good because it means their first date is coming!!

I was so dissapointed when i read that it was just a dream. Urgh! Poor Monica!
Looking forward to their date.

I can definately tell this is your work, mate. Guess who? :P

I can't wait for their date and i can't believe that Stuart would do something like that. But i guess it was to cool him self off...what a stupid fight. Anyway, update soon!

i love this. no, i LOVE this. you really have me curious. i especially liked the mention of the russian imperial family, because they've been a particular interest of mine for a few years now. maria was my favorite because of the way she carried on with the soldiers. monica is interesting. she seems so young for someone who's supposed to be seventeen. is there a reason for that, or is she just sheltered? and william...gawd. i'm having fun just imagining him! please update soon. you've definitely caught my curiosity.

A songfic, cleverly snuck in?

Alright.