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| beulah-land 2006-06-05 ch 1,  | abusei really love the first stanza.there's something about the way the words roll together. i guess maybe i just know the feeling. |
| simpleplan13 2006-05-26 ch 1, | abusethis is beautiful.. love it |
| X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abuseI don't know what to say, but I do admire your style. Write on. |
| Lucid Nonsense 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. "where candlelit moons shimmered" is beautiful, great job. |
| clockwork Kiss 2006-05-16 ch 1, | abusem. i like "Candlelit moons". sounds like my past couple of summers too. i like it. i think you had more to say, because the poem is so general and brief, but what you did put down is nice. i like the use of the word "sip". i love it when people use rare verbs. ha. anyways. very nice write. |
| faking closure 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abusehmm thats gorgeous. i love your writing :) -naomi loves |
| ADSpencer 2006-05-09 ch 1, | abuseWonderful! Once again...your style is terrific. |
| AllyCred 2006-05-09 ch 1, | abuseI really like this, its very deep and moving, so much going on in it, but theres also this sense of calm coming over the poem as you read it, well done, this is amazing! |
| classic violet 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abuseoh, gorgeous. simply lovely. |
| astral boy 2006-05-07 ch 1, | abusenice, it's festive and exciting. likes. |
| B. M. Reed 2006-05-06 ch 1, | abusebeautiful. i adore it. |
| a lonely september 2006-05-05 ch 1, | abusei love this... it's so incredible. i love reading your stuff, it's the ultimate love and this... this was just awesome. brilliant job. |
| she wants revenge 2006-05-05 ch 1, | abuse(fantasy too real/in a part of the world/where candlelit moons shimmered/the colors of your skin-/beaches and clubs and sex) these lines are amazing. stirrs up memories of my summers past, adolescent heartbreaks... your poetry is always beautiful. never stop writing |
| Chemically Induced 2006-05-05 ch 1, | abusea dazzling, fractured picture you paint here masterfully with words. "(fanstasy too real" was my favorite line. what is great about this poem--as most of your poems--is that none of the sentences make a real sentence. they never seem to end or start, but the images are created perfectly, and they are created in such a way that the motion of the words is part of the theme. not a very good explanation, but in short: i love your style. unique, explosive, and beautiful. :) love, c.induced. |
| poetic abortion 2006-05-04 ch 1, | abusei like. oo, the pretty. ~* Noelle |