This one's good. I like it.

I like this one... and would have loved to get my ex to kiss me one last time. But time changes us all, and I made mistakes, and he is human. I love this poem, it sounded like it came from my heart...

Oh.. and on my poem "Who Will Stand When I Fall", I write what I feel. And thats what I was and am feeling. Write what you know, it sounds better. Good Job.~Panda

Hi there! Just wanna say thanks a lot for the review of 'The Raider's Dream'. Much appreciated!

I'm not much of a poetry critic, but I like this one the best out of the the bunch that I read...it makes me feel warm and fuzzy for some reason...

this was wonderful. there was great flow never any awkward placement of words. i liked it a lot!

AWW! That's really sweet Whitney! Well written, nice theme, and very romanticist! Keep on writing and I just might have to leave you more reviews. ;)

~Das Mewwy-en

That was really good, EF! I think you should submit it to a poetry contest or something, seriously! Where did you get this inspiration? I especially liked the way you used repetition to make a couple lines or words stick in our minds. Keep writing! ~Tatharwen Took~

Hey, that was really good! Romantic poetry seems to be a strength for you-you should write more!

And once again, great use of repition.

"Because I make mistakes

And you are human"Did you separate yourself from the species on purpose? Because either way, I feel the separation, and I feel like it adds to the poem quite a bit. I enjoy it lots. ^_^

Keep up the great work!

loved it. it was beautiful and powerful. totally know the feeling. great job.