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inquistrix
2006-05-04
ch 1,
Interesting order. Original, artfully done. However, I did wish for a little knowledge of the background behind the narrator's current state of mind. Kudos.
Faithless Juliet
2006-05-04
ch 1,
I loved the aspect of this "dear mother" theme, and the line: "Mother you always were the daughter I loved so dearly," plays so heavily on the relationship. Slightly twisted, but overwhelmingly honesty - the lessons in learning to love those who sire you. Wonderful work.

Much love,Juliet.
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