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| inquistrix 2006-05-04 ch 1, | Interesting order. Original, artfully done. However, I did wish for a little knowledge of the background behind the narrator's current state of mind. Kudos. |
| Faithless Juliet 2006-05-04 ch 1, | I loved the aspect of this "dear mother" theme, and the line: "Mother you always were the daughter I loved so dearly," plays so heavily on the relationship. Slightly twisted, but overwhelmingly honesty - the lessons in learning to love those who sire you. Wonderful work. Much love,Juliet. |