I get the feeling that something really awful happened to you to cause this melancholy of doubt.

The content is such a dichotomy of thoughts...and leads to numerous possibilities...especially the line "how could you do that to m...m...mmuh...me" The stuttering throughout really makes the reader somehow feel sorry for you, as if you were just a child that's been abused somehow.

Anyway, very interesting.

And yes, f/p can be so infuriating sometimes. Please, if you don't mind, go check out my page and see my latest frustration in the user profile. (btw, you might want to remove the review from #38, as it's one that I removed and replaced...not b/c of your review, but b/c your review was in line with my own thinking...I never could express what I meant with that analogy...so out it went!) Thanks, Peach Rose... T/P

Wow. This is unbelievably powerful. Kind of smashed me in the face, like the black cross. Excellent, excellent work!

I like the way you've manipulated the words, it's very original.