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Reviews For: Betrayal
Patricia Louise 2006-05-11 . chapter 1
Great poem! Who is it? Tell me.
ADSpencer 2006-05-08 . chapter 1
Great poem, Kimmi! Nice drama.
O.r.i.g.i.n.a.l.isn't.My.style 2006-05-04 . chapter 1
...Dramatic, but actually a pretty realistic part of life. How even the people who betrayed you can still melt your emotions, especially when you plan to betray them...I liked how you wrote the poem, one part about the betrayal, but the other part where you start to break and feel guilty. Good job on the poem. Bravo^^
TornXAngel 2006-05-04 . chapter 1
I'm going insane with anticipation! Please, PLEASE update soon! I'm waiting!! I love your writing!
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