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Reviews For: Revealing Moonlight
AkaraRhulain Ranger of Majicka 2007-03-21 . chapter 1
Oh pretty colors! NOT!
Jessica Wright 2006-06-14 . chapter 1
Like haikus...? Then again, I'm not sure who doesn't...
Moondog Dozier 2006-05-05 . chapter 1
I like the specific imagery of the second line, and the conceptual imagery of the final line. Great connection of these two types of imagery. Good haiku.
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