I DO wish I can appreciate poems more. But I guess I just can't 'feel' for the poem. I won't say 'great!' or 'beautiful!' anymore because I think that's lying when I really don't feel anything.

But if I do say it next time, it means I understand and truly feel for it ^^ And don't feel bad, the problem's with me, not you =)

i love all the questions.. interesting style

The use of question marks was very successful in creating the mood of the poem. It had me leaning forward a little bit, hoping for an answer to the not-really-question questions.

Never mind the fact that teen angst is overrated, this comes across quite nicely. Though for some reason it sounds like lyrics to a punk band's ballad to me, it guess it works as a poem too. Which is good.

Keep it up. ;)

At first instance thought it was a sad breakup poem.

and these lines blew me away;

//And was it all just a dream?Or reality bent?What difference does it make?When you're no longer here.//

Dood! You effing promised me that you'd review Talking Things! You F*! I am reviewing this one so you can review me. Capish?

Anyway, like the girl said (I think the reviewer was a girl...) Beautiful and sad. i can feel the emotions flowing from keyboard to page and from page to people. Of course, you've heard this many times but what's another one?

Awesome!

Beautiful