Aw.
I liked how it was a sort of sublte romance, not kissing and that sort of stuff. But it was really sweet, and I really liked it.
It would be nice if you could continue this, but it's your choice.
Loved it. =]

I'd first just like to point out that I think I spotted a "pave" that should've been "pace" and a "tat" that might have supposed to been "hat."
Other than that, this was very cool. (: It's cute and isn't like many oneshots (falling in love in 100 words). It's also well-written, and I'm really glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (:

Thats such a cute story!

PG

aw how cute!! =)

Strangely awesome :D
Loved it, great job!
-Aria

You wrote this "really quickly"? Wow. :) That's hard to believe. I take a long time writing, editing, and re-editing my stuff.

This work is pretty good. It caught my eye because of her turquoise eyes. A little change of perspective never hurt anybody, eh? It didn't hurt Mike. :)

Cute ;)

Rock on. Accordions are vastly underrated. Keep writing. I am waiting for the next chapter. And there better be one...

Interesting. Could have elaborate it more though so that the characters and plot have a little depth to it ^^