What a culture shock from your last creation - in that one I got the strong sense that you could see/know everything, where as in this I feel like you're blinded, and aren't sure of everything.

The narration is girlish, flatteringly flirty with a helpful hint of angst (the raw 'i want you' kind.)

I like it; not as strong as the first piece, but still good. You have a talented free-flow all your own. Cherish it.

Much love,Juliet.