I think I unsersatadn exactly what you meant in your summary about apathy being an emotion in itself even though it is a lack of emotion. It's hard to explain being so oxymoronic. (at least I think that is the word I am looking for.) I think you did a really good job in this poem of showing the fact that that a lack of emotion is an emotion. I especially loved the lines : It’s a voidPurely taintedWith everythingAnd nothingEvery colorDrawn inTainting blackSo that it’s blackNo more.They make perfect sense in their own way and I think that those lines probably best summarize what you are trying to say in this poem.

Wow. This is just...Wow. It has made me somewhat speechless. I can't say anything besides the fact I am blown away. This, I love.

this is really good. I like it. It flows very nicely and works out evenly

~Sorrow~

WOW...This was so powerful, i love the way it just flows so beautifully, well done, this poem is just amazing!

Excellent. I remember when you said "I'll show them numbness is an emotion in and of itself." I didn't know you would capture it so well.

Very dark and moody. I like the way you structured the poem, it adds to the depth I think. All around good poem. - J.