GREAT STORY!It truly is...but honestly i DONT like the alternate ending, i love how they have a happen ending, maybe you can do an update or and ep to show that she did marry him and have his kids...

i didnt like the alternate ending and wish that there was more of mel and franklin.. but it was a nice ending :)

I wish I wouldn't of read the alt. ending! I liked the idea of them being together. This was a good story, just like the rest!

Aww, this chapter was so sad. It made me cry! I'll read some of your other stories and review on them as well.

i like the 1st ending much bettrr

Wait- that was confusing? I didnt get it, but its so sad, wtheck! update soon?

chelchang

i absolutely love it!!

Its cute. Great job.

LLC ;)

Aww, I wish that this story didn't have to end. It shocked me to find that Francesca loved Melissa, but I'm glad things are turning out alright between them. I hope you will write a sequel to this story.

yea can u plz put the alternate ending i wannt to c it even thou this ending was very sik

how can someone be so cruel? why would they do that to franklin!? aww this is suchh a great story. I can't wait to read more.

*sniff* *sniff* franklin is missing...DARN IT!

damn that bitch francisca! my god she is such a freakin bitch goin behind her back like that to b with jake. and r u saying that francisca is bisexual? weirdd...

i luv this story tho and PLEASE keep writing. i want MORE! MOREE! and thank u for reviewing sum of my stuff, i appreciated it! hope to c more from u soon!

*TheNextLittleMermaid*

This is a really good story so far, I can't wait to see what develops. I dont understand Melissas feelings though, she needs to pick its not right for her to make Franklin wait.

I loved your story. I was just randomly searching for a story to read, and yours came up. I hope you update soon because this story made me smile during the sweet scenes between Melissa and Franklin (It's kind of similar to me and my boyfriend.) and I nearly cried at the end of this chapter with the scene between Lukas and Jane. I felt so bad for Lukas and his sisters.

Heyy this story definetly deserves more reviews than it is getting. I LOVE franklin because he is not your average hott best friend's brother!

so is francisca ok with the relationship? when are melssia and franklin gonna get together? ah...

update soon! feel free to review my stuff too (its basically crap but w/e)

stop reading my review and update!