Cool story!

they're getting happy with the chloriform (i can't spell). and i'm just wondering why everyone just barges into his room. i mean EVERYONE!

you should have just told me what his name was. i mean in this story he went by Norbert, Nat, Tristan, Alexander, and Alex. i was completely confused all the way to you said his whole name. but other than that, you kept me on the edge of my seat. great job.

where did the name nat come from tristan. and another thing, is tristan bi?

GOOD STORY

that's a BIG family!! big families are nice though, everyone has someone to spend time with :) great story, cya later ~ Alenor

Nice story men

Aw come on! You call him Tristan then Norbert then Alexander make up your mind already!!

it's infuriating not misterious it just pisses off the reader, it's so confusing!! god...


I had to get that out of my system really couldn't help myself...

Other than that not a bad story... kinda weird but no bad.

This was nutty, funny, beautiful and optimistic, great story!

sorry i can't read anymore because i am confused about whos tristan, and samantha and norbert and nat and thom and kelly. try to better explain the story and maybe i'll better understand it at another time. sorry about the bad reveiw. C.P.

I think this story was awsome!! it was very cute!! People are to lazy to review...tisk tisk people the authors need to hear what you think it makes them feel good! but yes great story!

i am the first rviewer, going where no review has ever gone before! haha. well, i enjoyed this story, and i already read the first chapter of the sequel. keep writing!