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| a reader 2006-09-27 ch 1,  | Hey this is nice. But it feels likeprose, a little, cos if it were all in a paragraph it would be normal. Its cool, yeah, but it scares me. Seriously. |
| KASoroka 2006-05-06 ch 1,  | I loved the flow to this one. Nicely done. |
| poemkitten7 2006-05-05 ch 1, | This is so beautifully written. There's a lot of anger and vengence in this poem, and the rhythm is great. I really like the flow of the poem. Great job. Keep writing! *adds story to favs* |
| tinkabel 2006-05-05 ch 1, | i really like it well done |