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sueb262 2006-05-05 . chapter 1
I liked the whole visual of this (by a window, images flashing by) as well as the stretching of time: years through centuries, then snapped back to seconds, emphasizing the (at bottom) slipperiness of these measurements.

And what an intriguing idea, that of the rainbow "hiding"--REALLY liked that!
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