I see in your profile you said that you don't believe in yourself or your poetry. After reading your work, I don't see writing, please.

I like the second line... I actually thought it was quite funny, because it made me think of a married man having a crazy night out and coming home late at night to be reprimanded by his wife. Haha... and i hate to burst your bubble, but borns is not a word. . Bourn is a word though..

Well said my dear. At least you know your place. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.