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| Raiyune 2006-05-06 ch 1,  | abuseWow, I know what that's like... Well, I think this is pretty nice. I like your metaphor of describing yourself as a book with a bitter end. The only thing is that sometimes, the rhythm doesn't stay consistent. It helps if you read your poem to yourself aloud... or maybe it's just me. x] Good work. |