that was awesome, and it's exactly what one would think while considering love in that situation. I love the obscenities, make it feel really real, y'know!

You're good at poetry. So maybe it's good that these keep sprouting from you...? Either way, I really love this, and how you mixed the emotional descriptions in with the imagery of the snow. Good job.

Good poem.

Nice stream-of-concious-ish flow.

And I think everyone's happiness depends on other people...it just helps to get your happiness from other people's happiness, even when they don't recognize that you're the source.