I love the way this is written, it makes it seem so much more magical and beautiful. It's so very pretty and elegant.

I likey this one...8D

totally awesome, a bit hard to understand though. about keeping a man right?

Awesome poem... love the formatting. It sort of makes certain words/phrases stand out (like the middle) However, sometimes it felt a little cluttered, like there were too many things going on at once (but that's only my opinion. I'm not fond of underlining things). "devour the inards of your deformed heart." beautiful imagery...