Reviews for Wiping Tears, Collecting Rent

Cloudsinthesky 2006-05-09 ch 1,	abusei like this a lot, peeing in a cup takes real strength, don't think i'd be able to do that lol good job with this. Yet agian your words have a nice flow. Keep up the good work.
Raiyune 2006-05-06 ch 1,	abuseYour poem has a very good rhythm... I found that some of the other writers on fiction press sacrificed their rhythm in order to rhyme, but you were able to satisfy both categories. I especially love the ending. Nice job, keep writing. :]
QueenVixta 2006-05-06 ch 1,	abuseFirstly thanks for your review, it meant a lot. Secondly, great poem! The rhyming is excellent and very original. The last verse was my favourite. Beautifully written, well done. Vx