Nice poem. Fitting title.

~Twilight Starr~

This reminds me exactly of a certain situation I just got myself out of. Only it was backwards and upside down from this. I love the simplicity of this even though you say so much.

i found it incredibly eerie in the sense that, well, it came to me as a bit of necrophilia and adultry; the hotness overwhelmed it though, the sweetness and the pure and utter love put into each word is just dazzling. i love it, it leaves me with goose-bumps and unpleasant things in my head and now i have to look up a good "forbiden" love poem now. lovelylovelylovely. ♥

~* Noelle

sweet & simple.

i love your name, btw. it's gorgeous & so very pertty.

holy **..that was so beyond..I applaud your vision.

spells out one of my more serious relationsips. he was paralyzed- half dead half alive -and he tried to kill me with him through lies and manipulation and self pity. this was beautiful. absolutely gorgeous. & it's going on my favorites..

necrophelia?

a little bit too much thinking on my part

i feel like it is a mental metaphor. well, that is an interesting thought

a physical metaphor

I like this. Although it does need some work. It spells a story and yet I cannot read it... it needs to be longer. Write On!