I really like the first poem...the rest don't really make sense (or say much...your meaning is lost) although "make a wish, anne" is allright.

well, this is a pretty bit of poetry.
a necklace with a few beautifully chosen words like beads strung together.
Very pretty.

Wow, that is an incredible piece. So short, but holy **, does it pack a punch. And you used your penname, which is fun. Nice work! Keep writing! :)

beautiful.

this is really rich, because the imagery's suberbly strong, hence the great impact. this reminds me of spring.

this reminds me of winter. frosty, and delicate.

twin trails

i dont know, it was a bit weak.but i feel that may be the point

wow...such morbidly dark undertones, to a seemingly simple and straightforward describtion. this is genius, really cleverly done and put together.

summer, midnight, mix of emotions and settings . "three floating dandelion seedsfall subtly into the web of your hair

" beautiful attention to detail.

heartbreak, delicate, soft, thin, pretty and tragic. the bruises on your collarbone...what an image.

Wow, I like your style. Also love the flower references, I'm a sucker for those.

short and to the point. the delicate idea of ribbon contrasted so sharply by the harsh reality of bruising and pain... lovely poem, brilliant job.

beautifully sad.

love, val

mm. sieves.

it sounds awfully hopeless. but i find joy in this, somewhere.

1 and 2 had this beautiful, languid quality. half-dream, half-real. 3 shifts all of a sudden & plunges into this drowning play. & it's sharp, not soft. pretty. love the contrast between them, & i like how 3 has three different levels to the scene. it's surreal. lovely.

~kait