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| ShadesofBlue69 2007-07-28 ch 4,   | I really like the first poem...the rest don't really make sense (or say much...your meaning is lost) although "make a wish, anne" is allright. |
| ShadesofBlue69 2007-03-11 ch 1, | well, this is a pretty bit of poetry. a necklace with a few beautifully chosen words like beads strung together. Very pretty. |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2007-01-13 ch 1, | Wow, that is an incredible piece. So short, but holy **, does it pack a punch. And you used your penname, which is fun. Nice work! Keep writing! :) |
| beyond.that.horizon 2007-01-12 ch 4, | beautiful. |
| les petits bateaux 2006-10-08 ch 2, | this is really rich, because the imagery's suberbly strong, hence the great impact. this reminds me of spring. |
| les petits bateaux 2006-10-08 ch 1, | this reminds me of winter. frosty, and delicate. |
| Aquafied 2006-08-27 ch 4, | twin trails i dont know, it was a bit weak.but i feel that may be the point |
| citrus scented 2006-06-01 ch 3, | wow...such morbidly dark undertones, to a seemingly simple and straightforward describtion. this is genius, really cleverly done and put together. |
| citrus scented 2006-06-01 ch 2, | summer, midnight, mix of emotions and settings . "three floating dandelion seedsfall subtly into the web of your hair " beautiful attention to detail. |
| citrus scented 2006-06-01 ch 1, | heartbreak, delicate, soft, thin, pretty and tragic. the bruises on your collarbone...what an image. |
| Jezsh 2006-05-16 ch 3, | Wow, I like your style. Also love the flower references, I'm a sucker for those. |
| she wants revenge 2006-05-08 ch 1, | short and to the point. the delicate idea of ribbon contrasted so sharply by the harsh reality of bruising and pain... lovely poem, brilliant job. |
| okay valentine 2006-05-07 ch 3, | beautifully sad. love, val |
| Aquafied 2006-05-07 ch 3, | mm. sieves. it sounds awfully hopeless. but i find joy in this, somewhere. |
| she's not breathing 2006-05-07 ch 3, | 1 and 2 had this beautiful, languid quality. half-dream, half-real. 3 shifts all of a sudden & plunges into this drowning play. & it's sharp, not soft. pretty. love the contrast between them, & i like how 3 has three different levels to the scene. it's surreal. lovely. ~kait |