Great poem. Interesting and creep! I loved it!

this is really interesting. i like how it ends, too. also, great descriptions. so... yeah... awesome poem!

AWESOME.

Just.. no other word. PLEASE add to this!! Please please please!!

KW!

~wolfeh (3.57 in the pm)

Awesome. Is it a one chapter kind of thing or will there be more? I hope theer'll be more. Heh. Metal man.

Very Interesting! I can't wait to see more!

hehehe dissenegration is a big word ^-^Great poem thingy mabober O.o...lolz me likey. ^_~ Me likey a whole lot...ME likey all your poems/stories Yup yup yup. tee hee. :huggles:

~Gerry

Now this is intresting enough. It is kinda creepy, but for some reason I like it.

Intriguing. Keep writing. Constance

*grins* I like, of course. Thanks for the review! Laters, KD

hm.. "hi"

THANKS for pointing out that idiot mistake i made there on ch6. i fixed it.. his name is definitely still joseph!

Hmm, interesting.