that is a great chapter! i wanna know wut happens next! :) ^-^ update soon please! :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)

Hmph, it took just two hits before she lost consciousness... Poor girl, especially if she did not know anything about her unexpected, unusual powers.

Though this is a short story I think it is very well narrated. I like the first person style, and how you describe the thoughts and feelings of your character.

YAY FIRE!! pyrokinetic stories are always fun and it will be interestion to see where you take this story because you can do so much with it. I love the concept and the black out after being called a witch and having rocks thrown at you will grab anyones attention

Interesting. The setting seems very realistic. I can't wait to see how Keira deals with her pyrokinetic abilities. Update soon.

S.S. Dailey

I like it. Your descriptions are fantastic! A bit short... but it's kinda too early to really judge this story now... update soon!

OMG, they threw stones at her!? >sob< Can't wait to see what happens next ;)

wow, alot of stories remind me of my own. Yours remined of my past story " Panther Fire" But, really diffent, and it's in first person too--very nice, Keep up the good work. ^^

waterhealer

very interesting...this will definitly be a story i will look forward to reading. review soon!

WOW. This is realy good, Keira sounds like a really interesting character and i want to know more! Your descriptions are great, i can really picture the scene. I love the story line please keep it up! Cant wait for next update!