ah, so poestic and so beautiful. simple as that.

there's not much i could possibly say...i am winded. caught up in the effortless rush of words and left at the end wanting more...i love it

Amazing, I really liked it. very descriptive. don't know what else I can say except it reminds me of my dreams; the better ones.

Noticed u like Ichi the Killer on your profile, that's one crazy movie!

Keep writing

Alan

Wonderful rush of feeling and description. This really captures the mood well. Good work.

Thanks for the review! Oh wow. This is some deeply imaginative poetry. it is very, visual i guess you would call it? I like it alot!