 poohketchix 2009-04-08 . chapter 2Huh. Intensifying. :)) Update soon! I want more! :> |
 chocolatechipash 2008-05-06 . chapter 2good story cant wait to meet shane. |
 D-Mish 2008-05-04 . chapter 2I really like this idea (ps, the summary totally captivated my attention, double thumbs up). The way you have written these chapters is efficent. One thing i dont like about the story is that she was once inlove with him and is unsure about her feelings for him now. I think it should have been shes over him, or they never exsisted. Or even that he loves her, but wont betray his brother or something. PPLEASE update this, im keen to know what happens! |
 glamoureste 2007-12-06 . chapter 2ADJfksal fjdkl;saj; lf ;!
OH MY GOD!
WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?
update soon, pretty please? it's been so long... :[
and i think this story is gonna turn out REALLY well. |
 EasilyDamaged 2007-09-22 . chapter 2Oh no! It makes me so sad to see you haven't updated this in over a year. =( It's brilliant, honestly. So refreshing! Plus I adore Chase, but I'm sure I'd love Shane even more if you started to introduce the character. I hope someday you'll get the motivation to update this again! It's truly refreshing to read. |
 mer-person 2007-09-09 . chapter 2ahh..its been a year since you updated this. pleaseplease tell me you will continue with it, i want to see where it is heading! |
 enigmatic.allure 2007-05-20 . chapter 2i really enjoy the story! so update! LOL i noticed that you included Noah from your other story "Catch Me...", so would the characters of the stories be involved in each other's lives? I understand if you haven't been able to update cuz it's still during the school year but please update when summers come!(^_^) |
 ess3sandra 2007-03-06 . chapter 2the plot thickens =) |
 ess3sandra 2007-03-06 . chapter 1damn, brothers non the less. woohoo, poor her. |
 luckythirteen 2007-01-23 . chapter 2I love it! It's absolutely fantabulous! Update soon. ^-^ |
 RayRay and Beanzie 2007-01-07 . chapter 2hiyaa..awesome story..seems very interesting and i cant wait to meet this Shane..heh..anyways keep up the great work and please update son! ciao |
 CTRL 2006-12-12 . chapter 2Bah.
Update really soon, please?
:/ |
 Rader 2006-11-12 . chapter 2 Um.. please update? |
 a case of me 2006-10-29 . chapter 2this is going to be a great story.
hey, is the carpenter that works at the company the Noah in your other story Catch Me When I Fall? Because it would really cool if it was. Simply because I love it when that happens. |
 kiiwii short cake 2006-10-06 . chapter 2ii love your storiess =) |