|Reviews for this is perfect|
| HauntedMisery 5/9/06 . chapter 1
Wow, this is one of your best pieces, I love this, the format, the words, everything, great work _
| she's not breathing 5/7/06 . chapter 1
prettypretty angst. i heart the title. i still would like something to be done with the parenthesis that's more drastic. this way, it reads the same with them or without them. i think it's amazing when the formatting provides a completely different lens. just my outlook, though. good on you for capturing something raw in this poem.
| Moon-Chaser 5/7/06 . chapter 1
Very emotive, you express yourself so well in this poem, the feelings are so plain anyone could read this and feel what you are feeling.
Keep it up.
| having reached closure 5/7/06 . chapter 1
ooh this is wonderful, i can really feel how you feel in here. are you ever going to tell that person what you wrote in here?
i like this a lot :)
PS: i hope you feel better
PSS: wow there's a lot of 'feel's in this review
| Midnight Doorman 5/6/06 . chapter 1
Interesting use of parentheticals, a unique literary style with that.
In response to the poem, I'll quote A Perfect Circle "What's your rush now? Everyone will have his day to die."