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Reviews For: Making Queens

Miley Hauke
2008-03-19
ch 1,
I like how you're not at all afraid to point out the huge flaws that hide behind that which our society considers so glamorous. Way to go!
zamthezombieman
2006-06-13
ch 1,
o, genious stuff as always. i see not much has changed. hahaha, to the reviewing...I could picture all of this very well...and the tone is so cheery...which makes it real creepy. Its just like an announcment, "Here she is Folks" and all her problems are being revealed to the world, like the tabloids or entertainment news or something. yea...I dont know if you meant all that, but Im weird, so...yea, good job. Zam approves.
simpleplan13
2006-05-26
ch 1,
i love that last line.. great piece.. very funny in a sad sorta way
write25
2006-05-07
ch 1,
perfect. while not all of them are like that, enough are, and this was a wonderful personification of those girls. i really felt for the images of bulimia, the dark side behind the outward beauty. going on my favorites list. ~mariah
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