Wow! This is really awesome. You really have a way with words.
~April~

very deep. very taunting. very delicously gothic. i like the tone and the repition of 'tick tock'- it's really alarming and awesomely attention-grabbing. you're an awesome writer!

Wow.. pretty dark n creepy.. to me, anyway.. but i like it - the imagery is superb! And i love the repitition!

KW!

~wolfeh (3.59 in the pm)