Very good! I really like the story!
I can't wait till Chapter 7 to see what happens!
=3

omg that's a very nice fic plz continue it!! i mean you are gonna finish it...right? right?!

Wow. This is... quite different than the original version, but I think I like this version better because it's not constrained by the boundaries of the FY universe. Although I must say that I probably would have picked Kimiko to go with KC. Brady is just... so... *girly*! But it's funny too, the scene with the bath in chapter seven reminded me of an Inuyasha episode. Y'know, if Inuyasha suddenly looked like Shippo. He still acts like Inuyasha though. ::grins:: Anyways, I'll definately be checking back in on this story. Keep up the good work.

NOO!! i don't want gabe to die!! i just know its going to be a heartbreaking moment! you're good at those kinds of touching works!! all the worse for me because they make me want to read it so much and i really get into the stories, and if he doesn't die i'll be happy!! i actually have no idea how this is going to turn out...hehehe...but you supply that knowledge soon won't you!! very very soon i hope!! keep going cause you have great big fans out there!! like me...UPDATE!

Wow. I just started reading your story today and I think its very well written, the character development is really good, and the plot keeps me on the edge of my seat, eager for more. I can't wait for chapter 11 ^_^
~Ferocia

omg...this is a really good story. i can't wait to see what will happen!! and this nightmare wolf sounds really scary!! that's really cool that you actually dreamed the thing up! i don't think i understand the leather crest thing though. but that is really cool. you have a very vivid imagination!

I'm thinking the little boy is the winged man from before right? well i guess i'll find out... adn can you tell me which stories you plan on finishing? i really want to know how Heart of Silver Soul of Glass ends. And a few other stories as well. Can you post that on your fanfiction profile please?

I love it! Update soon! and it was easy to follow...lol...can't wait to see what happens next!

Oh, this is so good. I like how this is going. I wonder is KC going to be in shock? *ponders* I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm really looking forward to it. Your characters are so good!

Your welcome, I'm sorry I wasn't helpful to you, but I completely understand. ^__^ I'm looking forward to seeing what you plan to do. (Gah, I sound like an english teacher.)

I personally feel that you made an error by letting us know already where KC heard Jezebel's voice before. I think that it would have been better to set us up. Such as going:

"Slowly the silken bed canopy was replaced with a canopy of tree leaves, and superimposed over that were several shadowy faces hovering over KC’s still form. She heard voices and as she didn't quite hear what they were saying, she knew they were speaking about her. An uneasiness fell apon her as Jezebel's voice spoke to her, lulling her into half awake nightmares."

And then ending it there.

And then maybe much later on letting the cat out of the bag (literally) by saying something like:

"As KC happily nodded her head and agreed, the words Jezebel had just shared with the court sounded familiar. Her sight dimmed she felt a chill run down her spine. She closed her eyes and with stark darkness she realized that she was in the forest. She heard words that she hadn't remembered since she first came to this land. And above her, golden eyes flashing. "Bring her." They purred.

KC burst back into reality. Quickly looking to where Jezebel was sitting, she met her gaze, the golden eyes flashed once again. Jezebel lifted her cup in mock salute. KC swallowed, and lifted her cup in return. Behind the goblet Jezebel's eyes laughed. She knew KC now understood. And after the speech Jezebel had just given, that KC could do nothing about it."

And then end of that chapter, or whatever. Basically in this chapter you can let the reader know this, but not the character, making the reader want to tell KC (but unable to ^__^) so they keep reading. I just wanted to make a suggestion. I'm really sorry if I'm being too forward with all this, and that this is so long. And that I'm really loving this story. Reading these chapters made me tingle inside. ^__^ I hope you continue to write this fabulous story. I really to love it. *hugs*

This is wonderful! I know I've written a lot of reviews now, but this story is fabulous! I love it! *smiles* This is a great story.

O__O egad, egad, egad! What happens next! This is spectacular! Are you a professional writer?

Just out of curiousity, is the spelling of 'kimiko' done purposely like that? Because I'm not sure if there are other spellings, but I thought it was Kumiko. Sorry if I'm being naive, I really like the story!

Hey . . . I like this! But why is the angel (since I suppose he's an angel) now a boy? Hmm. I think I need to read somemore . . .

Aw, poor KC, lol. Stuck sharing a bath with her favorite person. Glad to see Brady's back, and in good humor though. I honestly thought she might join Azrael's side. And Gabriel's back! He's a great character. I'm glad you introduced him into this latest version of your story. Can't wait to read more!