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| Noihseret 2006-06-19 ch 1,  | abusewow. very powerful. very nice ^^ I liked how you just used she and the boy etc. that was cool. but in a few cases it seemed a bit redundant (sp). great job though. and thanks for the review ^^. and I'll give you a hint about Roque... I liked your vampire idea. alot. weather (sp) or not that's what he is, well I can't tell you. but let's just say there's more about him than meets the eye. BWAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA |
| Kaze no Shizuku 2006-05-07 ch 1, | abuseIt was, I admit, a well written, star-crossed love story, yet there are a few gramatic problems that you should look up, Other than that I congratulate you for a job well done! |