This is very excellent. Perfect except for the small errors that the reviewer before me mentioned.

Very unique, as well.

This is really well written, there are a few slips in the style, there's a point when you use the word junk and it seemed to break the flow a little. It didn't fit with the style of it. Also the style seems a little pompous in places, a little arrogant, but I think that fits with the intellectual character you're writing.

It's good, reads well. If it wasn't for the talk of editors etc I'd have thought it was set in ancient greece, it seems to fit in with Socrates and the barrel philosophers. (I think they were the Cynics but don't quote me on that).

Hmm, I like it, I've never seen anything like it on the internet, the style reminds me a little of 'Perfume' though. Nice work, congrats.