I like this a lot. Very interesting, and tells the story in only a few words. Kudos.

TBF

I like how you described the water, it totally reminds me of my new story The Choice Between Water and Life, but it's different. Anyway, keep up the good work!

waterhealer

AW wow! What a good parody for the people drowning... very poignant (spelling right?!) oh and also... thanks for your kudos on my nonsense - what is kudos?