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Reviews For: Forty Winks

SarahJaneDrkAngl05
2006-07-26
ch 1,
wow that was good! i do the same thing when i cant sleep. i start to think about everything and it makes it worse! great job!

~SarahJane
Smeagol Fasir Kenobi
2006-05-24
ch 1,
If I had read this before seeing that you put it under the category of love, I might not have guessed that it had anything to do with love, which is good for me, because I've never really been in love, so it makes more sense to me when you can just take it out of that context. :) There are plenty of other reasons to not be able to sleep. (glares at sister, who is typically snoring on the top bunk) :)Namarie, mellon nin--Smeagol Fasir Kenobi
catching-falling-stars
2006-05-13
ch 1,
amazing! the rhyme and meter are perfect. this is exactly what i feel when i can't get to bed and i just start thinking about everything. wonderful poem!
xInSaNexBlOodyxPrInCeSs
2006-05-07
ch 1,
You know I love it. ^__^

~inhye
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