T_T She's not worth it, but your story was worth the time! Sad, but good.

Wow, harsh wonderfulness, i luved it :) Also very realistic, I luv the line where he tell her he luvs her an she says i kno but it just wasnt enough. Really great story.

M... Nice, I just love tragedy! But I was hoping that she was the girl who he slept with, but then the story would be cliche, right? I'm just a sucker for happy endings...

Brilliantly written.

this is a beautiful story!


xx

Wow... This.. Is very good, and it is true for many relationships one simple mistake can ruin something wonderful for forever.

Very strong voice here, good stuff.

This is very realistic. I know there are probably a ton of girls and guys out there who want to say that (was he/she worth it?) to people that have cheated on them, but can't. Instead, they have pictured scenarios similar to what you have written here. I also know of a bunch of people who do have the courage to say something like that to their boy/girlfriend's face. Great job :)

This definitely felt realistic. I loved it.

this is brilliant.
it was short, but you can really feel all the emotions and stuff.

it was such a jackass thing to do, but i cant help but feel sorry for him..

brilliant. i can really relate to this (unfortunately) lol

was she?

Wow. You can actually feel how painful and emotional those characters were. Very well written; Good job.

Ouch, I felt the sting of her emotions even though this piece was so short... I love it.

okay, i so like how you didn't even need to use names in this one-shot -- you went right to the punch and it's so good! just enough detail, just enough dialogue, and man. this one was sad but wonderfully written. g'job.