very seussian...whether its philosophical or not its amusing and well rhymed...sometimes poetry can just be aestetic...i enjoyed and had a nice chuckle...be well

Michael

Aww..it's so very very cute! I can almost imagine a crazy old lady running about looking for her shoe. XD

Exactly how I feel whenever I lose my shoes! I laughed through the whole thing, and it was very, very amusing. Perfect play with wording etc. Overall, awesome.

It's a little rough in some parts, but overall is a very nicely written poem. Good work

J

Haha, nice after all the depressing cutting poems...can't say anything, I write them. Anyways, thanks for writing something light. Good rhyming skills, doesn’t feel horribly forced.