Reviews for The Elemental War

Ballerina with a Gun 2006-05-07 ch 1,	abuseHmm...this a very mystical story, I think, that you will unfold. A bit of an info dump, but I have the same problem, so I'm not really touching that subject... I will be checking back on this for updates.
A.J.Calidor 2006-05-07 ch 1,	abuseYour prologue has a great storyline, but you need to add more detail. What does your main character look like? Why does the Ruler of the World's daughter go everywhere with them? Is the main charcter a male or female? Your sentences are short. "I did once. It wasn't my fault." can be combined. I hope to read more in the future.