ooh, this is very good...the anger has really poured through. I like the image its created, of someone whos grabbed everything and now should just crawl back under their rock, and you as the soulless person.

ifonlyitwassimple

Well, I know how you most certainly feel! I can also, say you won't be feeling the same way in a couple of weeks...cheer up monkey butt :)

Hmm... I feel the anger pouring out of this piece. I don't really think there are such things as enemies though... read my poem "Look At Yourself" and you'll understand what I mean. Nice Poem though! Write On!