That's nicely confusing and makes a good poem. Think a lot can understand that kind of feeling. Well done x

I remember conversations like that; those high school hallway jitter bug rambles. uniquely crafted.

Juliet.

What did you say? ha!

Interesting...who of us haven't been in this situation? Takes so much courage to get up the nerve...and then BOOM! someone jumps in there in front of us and steals our thunder.

(Sounds like IM)

The most telling line for me was (don't let go) for some reason...

Great quick-moving, captivating little poem.

ha ha. very clever. nice work.

Nothing to say but "** fantastic". It made me smile, it made me think, it flowed very well, and... well, way to be. Keep it up.

J