Nice, poem...

But, are we really going to reborn again after we die?

Wonders? Wonders?

xD let's find out after we die...

LOL

Nice (_)

This is cute, in a sweet serene sort of way. The wording is chosen is nice and feeling, but I did see one mistake, where you put to instead of too.

This was a very lovely poem. I really liked the soft emotion that you displayed in it. There was one part where I was wondering if you wanted it to stay the way you'd wrote it, and that was: "You to, will wave "bye" " Did you want the "to" to be that way, or "too".

But other than that, I really did love the poem. And I rarely express my like for something.

This was very pretty and colorful. Great work!

i love it. its really great!