Aw. Very characteristic of you. Ending it just where it goes good. I think this one kind of has potential for expansion too, you know? (LOL...economic terms again). But then again, you're so slow with TA that I guess you don't have time to expand another story. Sigh. Poor Napaea.

heh heh heh, if S ever gets her hand on the diary ^o^ Good story, I love the non cliche!!

Really cool story - a different spin on romance.

Selena's really nasty... makes me wonder if there isn't some kind of back-story.

Keep up the good work!

I loved this. The story is great, and it goes to show how a lot of girls feel. You did an amazing job with this story, and all your editing paid off. =) I have to say that the ending was my favorite part. How you didn't close off the story a certain way, you just left it open. I think that the last line was just perfect. You are a great writer!

lol.. nice story but what was the ending?! O_O

not really moving tho =/

I have many things to say, and none of them are negative.

Wow. Just wow. You are an amazing writer.

Aw, this was so cute! Poor Napaea :( She's in love.

This reminds me of my story, with the vow. But yeah. They're completely different. That was random but whatever. I'm a random person.

So I'm definately putting you on my author alerts. Keep writing! :)

it's really good.. you should write a longer version and publish it!!

brilliant. absolutely brilliant. loved the part where the whole school gangs up on napaea! that was too funny. great job!

Smashing story! It's an awesome song fic. The song fit the story perfectly. I like the choice of the song and the situation you formed the plot around. It's also got a cute ending with lyrics from the song. It's good that you editted it so many times. I find it tedious when I edit writing...lol. However, I think that Selena and Napaea will be really close friends once Napaea admits that she likes Ben aloud. They seem such rivals, but are so familiar. This sums up to an awesome story. Can't wait to hear more from you.