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| greatbritain2k3 2007-02-21 ch 1,  | abuseThat was good. It was clever how you worked all those biology terms in. I especially like the line about cutting class. |
| Coda Lovelance 2006-05-25 ch 1, | abuseI love the rhymes and the flow-- it pulls the reader forward and to the end like a magnet. As always, your writing is spectacular, keep it up. |
| ode to a firefly 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abuseHaha, my notes? Seen them lately? Star borders around sketches of flowers in vases and heart-shaped bass guitars. And yay, there's a quiz next time and we have a paper to write! *sobs* ~Christine~ P.S. Great poem, by the way. =P |
| boys kiss girls 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abusei.laugh.at you.hahaha.i am.a leaf.in the wind.watch me.soar.'what does thateven mean?' |
| poemkitten7 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abuseWow, that is so funny. I hate science. I'm in biology right now and I don't understand what the teacher is saying more than half of the time. So I can totally relate with this poem. I love the rhyming scheme and the smooth flow even with all those big words! :) Keep writing! |
| Midnight Star Lights 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abuseI love this! ~XoXo~ |
| Pheobe Meryll 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abusehehe, I felt like that a few times this semester but in the end I was kinda glad I'd taken it if it only forced me to look at life from a different perspective. It's "bacteriophages," btw XD |
| Passage 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abuseHaha I jast took that AP exam today |
| Faithless Juliet 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abuseNicely done; I hated science class too - when would you ever need to know THAT in the real world. Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |