I liked reading this poem, it broaches a subject that everyone can relate to.

I liked the pace of the poem, its quite slow and fits in with the theme of the poem quite nicely.

I particularly liked the line 'Then why did you hurt me', its very dramatic and it being the only instance where a question is asked, it jumps out at you.

Again, I have to admit that I wasn't fond of the lack of punctuation. Sometimes a full stop is what makes the poem more dramatic and intense, it captures the reader and gives them a chance to pause and really take in the words rather than glance over them.

Another thoughtful poem, good job.

Leila
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this one really spoke out to me. the ending made my heart ache a little. it was sad. was all these broken heart poems about a different person each time?

Was this about me?

I like the emotion coming from this, well done, very brave writing this down, i especially love the last line, spoke to me a lot.

so bittersweet..nicely written

i really like this is shows lots of emotion and passion

^_^

You sound like my sister. this is exactly how she felt about breaking up with her boyfriend... at least that's what it seems to be.

...nice...