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| Ironic Presence 2006-10-26 ch 1, | I really, really, REALLY liked this poem--nice use of the paradox! You win my GK Chesterton award of the day (he was a paradox master). I understand it, but do I fully? I will have to come back and analyze this poem some more. It is definitely worth studying. Paradoxes are so fun to unwind! And so worth the while--I find that it is much more satisfying to use a paradox to describe things than say things outight because sometimes there is no word to describe one thing; but two seemingly opposite words sometimes describe more adequately one idea than one word describing many ideas. Am I right? Or am I just insane? lol |
| Moonlit Tiger Lily 2006-08-21 ch 1, | That was lovely in its obscurity. It reminded me of that movie "Mirrormask" (excellent, by the way). I don't know what you mean about it being unfinished; it seemed fairly conclusive to me. However, if you want to share your concerns I would gladly do my best to help. |
| Neaera 2006-05-11 ch 1, | I absolutely love this. And I think then I am completely mad and brillant *grin* or at least I like to think :o) because I do understand this! lol well I think it's brillant Keep it up huns!! |
| Ivy Shoelaces 2006-05-10 ch 1, | It is very rich with imagery. Very good! |
| King Eagle 2006-05-09 ch 1, | It makes sense. But you can't explain it. Ironic, eh? LOL.Pun.Anyway, intresting. |
| Frozen Fire Artist 2006-05-09 ch 1, | As I said before, very nice, and the worst part... WHY AM I UNDERSTANDING THIS!?! >.< *slams head into wall* k, I'm good now... *blacks out* |
| sylvia's syndrome 2006-05-08 ch 1, | Well, I’m not sure I can make sense of this, so apparently I’m neither a genius or a psycho. However, the diction you used in this piece is simply gripping… in a dark, desperate kind of way. There is a lot of interest imagery and some thought-provoking paradoxes in this that I really like. This is definitely interesting, pleasurably fanciful, and creative in all ways… but I’m not at all sure what it means. |