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| griffint3 2007-11-09 ch 1,  | abuseO.O wow... |
| The Talented Mr. Evan 2007-06-05 ch 1, | abuseWoah. This was filled with opposites. And the differences between communities. New Eden: the utopia gone wrong. The new commandments were a great touch of originality. I liked the way you paralleled it to the story of Jesus. It gave it a lot of depth. How they both died because they were different and because they saw God in a different way. And then the Anti-Christ came along. The title was very fitting by the way. |
| multiples of six 2006-05-10 ch 1, | abuseWoah.. that was deep. First it was just like a fairly normal kid from our society transported inti a utopia, which was an original enough idea in itself.. and then you brought in Jesus.. and I was like "woah." Yeah. It was set up cool.. like ho w there's no quotations except the commandments. And like. Yeah. It was intense. I like it =) |
| Ahemait 2006-05-10 ch 1, | abusewow...that was totally bizarre. but it wa poetic and intruing all the same. i really liked it, seriously, especially the style in which it was written. great work, dont stop writng. (not taht you would, but i say taht just for emphasis. :P) |
| helpless-pretender 2006-05-09 ch 1, | abuseInteresting, very sad how he had to die for beiving something differnt. Just gets ya wondering what has this world come to huh? keep writing God bless |