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Lonely Too Much
Elizabeth Bilberry
2006-05-08 . chapter 1
Hmm, interesting poem. I think the 'tense shifts,' as you called it, suited the poem and the message it gave of. It true too, forgetting and ignoring the truth won't help. Keep writing and take care.
EB
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